“Tell us of the hunt, Makoto! Tell us of how Lord Yamato slew the demon boar!”
Makoto impassively stared at
the stars that blanketed the evening sky, then slowly shifted in his place
furthest from the fire as he studied the youthful faces that stared at him
expectantly. They all had heard the reports of what happened, but a mere
catalog of events was not what these men sought. They wanted a story, told in
the way only a gifted storyteller like Makoto could tell it.
Makoto ran a large hand across
his slightly wrinkled face. He stared at his hand for a long moment as if in a
trance, noting how the fingers were still thick and strong from decades of
pulling the string of his hunting bow. He mapped the veins that bulged from the
back of his hand and waited a moment longer before speaking. A good storyteller
knew that there was value in being patient in the telling. A story was built
not merely upon the relaying of the narrative itself, but upon the spaces
before and in between the narrative, upon the tense breaks and pauses that
cultivate anticipation in the listeners.
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The demon boar was the most
formidable creature we had ever hunted. It was larger than any bear, and more
cunning than a fox. Its tusks were the color of bleached bone and as long as a
man’s forearm. A shaggy brown coat of fur covered the bulging muscles of the
boar’s body and its fiercesome snout. Most terrifying of all were the beast’s
eyes, which glowed like hot coals inside its cavernous eye sockets. Those eyes
promised death to all who would dare hunt it.
Yamato rode boldly at the head
of the hunting band, clad in a gleaming set of steel armor, each gold-lacquered
piece tied together by crimson ribbons of the finest silk. His knocked bow (the
bow was in fact not Yamato’s, for our lord had accidentally left behind his own
bow and been forced to borrow another’s, but this detail Makoto saw fit to
leave out) was held firmly in one hand, while his other hand casually cradled
the reins controlling his handsome hunting horse. Thrust through the sash at
his waist was the Sacred Grass-cutting Sword Kusanagi, its long, curved blade
resting in an ornate bamboo scabbard.
When we spotted the boar, Lord
Yamato immediately loosed the hounds upon the beast. Although the dogs made a
valiant effort to harass the creature, the boar trampled and tusked the pitiful
bays in mere moments. Our lord then ordered us to unleash a volley upon the
demonic beast. Although the boar’s formidable appearance and ferocity frightened
us, we obediently loosed shafts upon the dread creature. To our terrified
surprise, the arrows bounced off the boar as if its fur coat was as strong as
metal.
It was then that the creature
charged us, smoldering eyes alight with rage. Although we turned to flee, the
boar’s powerful legs outpaced those of our horses, and the demon rapidly caught
up and brutally tore through our ranks. Men fell from their horses with
horrified cries and were trampled by the boar’s stomping hooves. Hunters and
horses alike were impaled by the beast’s tusks. A scant few, myself included,
managed to survive the boar’s onslaught and take cover within the trees.
The courageous Lord Yamato
alone stayed out in the open, his bow discarded in favor of his long lance.
(In fact Yamato too hid in the
woods, Makoto knew, but the old hunter remained silent on this point).
Yamato boldly charged the boar,
but his lance failed to pierce his foe’s hide and our brave lord’s steed was
run through by a gore-stained tusk.
(In truth Yamato already lost
his horse in the chaos that ensued before. He stood his ground behind a copse
of trees a bowshot away from where I hid, Kusanagi tightly gripped in his
hands).
Lord Yamato rapidly
disentangled himself from the flailing hooves of his dying horse and drew the Sacred
Sword from its scabbard. Fearless in the face of his demonic foe, Yamato
watched the boar stamp one of its hooves against the ground in preparation for
a charge.
(Makoto could still remember
how Yamato and the boar had played their waiting game, Kusanagi staying behind
the tree line and the demon patiently waiting for the lord to come out into the
open).
The boar charged Lord Yamato,
who leaped high into the air the moment before the creature was upon him. Our
glorious lord landed atop the beast and plunged Kusanagi deep into its
backside. Pulling free his blade, he leaped clear of the wounded beast and
watched it collapse into a heap of violent death throes, the demon’s squeals of
pain echoing loudly in the air.
(It was more difficult than
Makoto thought to not tell of his part in the slaying of the boar. He had
resisted the urge to admit that he had fired an arrow at the boar’s backside and
briefly drew the attention of the creature away from Yamato and to the old
hunter. It had been in that moment of distraction that Yamato had broken from
the trees and fell upon the boar with Kusanagi, killing the beast with a single
blow).
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Makoto saw the delighted faces
of the young men who looked at him as he finished his story and was content
with his narrative. It did not matter that the story he had told was a lie.
These men did not need truth. Thinking that Yamato had slain the boar by his strength
alone, these youths would grow in their love of Lord Yamato, and they would follow
him all the more fiercely. That was all that was important. As for Makoto, he
would content himself in knowing that he had played a small part in one of his
lord’s legends, even if no one else would ever know of it.
Author's Note: This story is based on "The Labors of Yamato: The Demon Boar" in the Japanese mythology unit. In the original story, Yamato kills this demonic boar all by himself by cutting off his tail and then driving him off a cliff. In this version I changed the manner in which Yamato kills the boar. However, the main departure that I take from the source material comes in how I've changed the story form in order to explore some different themes. I made this a frame story told from the perspective of a made-up character who accompanied Yamato on the boar hunt. Makoto is an aging hunter who is known as a skilled storyteller, but he struggles with the desire to take his share of the glory by telling of his secret part in the slaying of the boar. Deciding that, as a storyteller, it is his duty to tell the story that will help solidify the loyalty of Yamato's future generation of vassals, Makoto tells a version of the story that gives his lord all the credit. Whether or not his decision was a good one I leave up to the readers.
| A bit how I imagine what a Japanese hunting party might look like. (Image Information: Painting of Emperor Jimmu with an expeditionary party by Ginko Adachi (1890) |
Title: Romance of Old Japan, Part I: Mythology
Author: E.W. Champney and F. Champney
Year Published: 1917
Wow, this was really incredible. I really enjoyed reading it. Your use of detail and imagery was exquisite and I really felt like I was there, listening along, as Makoto told the story. Your retelling was great because it revealed a different side of the story and I love that you made up your own character to go along with it. I'm impressed and I can definitely tell you enjoy writing! I'm sure anyone would publish your stories and I wish you the best of luck!
ReplyDeleteHi again Kyle!
ReplyDeleteWow this was an awesome story! You without a doubt have a way with words and I cannot wait to read more of your stories! This sounded like an aged writer's story actually, it was wonderful. You will definitely be published one of these days! I have no idea how you came up with the idea of the outside character telling the story, but I'm glad you did! His nobility in telling the story in a way that would glorify his Lord was brilliant and loyal. I really loved it! Keep up the great work!